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Editing Practice/Yellow-billed Pintail: Keep One or Both?


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This Yellow-billed Pintail image was created with the Gitzo 3532 LS carbon fiber tripod, the Mongoose M3.6 head, the Canon EF 600mm f/4L IS II USM lens, the Canon 2x EF Extender III (Teleconverter), and the Canon EOS-1D X. ISO 400. Evaluative metering +1/3 stop: 1/640 sec. at f/11 in Manual mode.

Central sensor (by necessity) Expand/AI Servo Rear Focus AF on the upper breast just above the waterline active at the moment of exposure. Click on the image to see a larger version.

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Editing Practice/Yellow-billed Pintail: Keep One or Both?

Editing (not optimizing) your images is an important part of the digital photography experience. One of these years I will get around to doing an Editing Guide… In the meantime, I will start posting some series of similar images taken at almost the same moment and ask you which one or ones to keep and why. Most of you should find these exercises to be extremely valuable.

These two images, the first created on our initial morning at Puerto Natales, Chile at 07:54:47am, were made one second apart. Would you keep one or both? If you feel clearly that one is better than the other, please let us know which one and why. Be sure to click on each image to see the larger version.

The two 1200 pixel wide JPEGs here were created from the extracted JPEGs; both were sharpened, neither has been optimized.


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This Yellow-billed Pintail image was created with the Gitzo 3532 LS carbon fiber tripod, the Mongoose M3.6 head, the Canon EF 600mm f/4L IS II USM lens, the Canon 2x EF Extender III (Teleconverter), and the Canon EOS-1D X. ISO 400. Evaluative metering +1/3 stop: 1/640 sec. at f/11 in Manual mode.

Central sensor (by necessity) Expand/AI Servo Rear Focus AF on the upper breast just above the waterline active at the moment of exposure. Click on the image to see a larger version.

Image B

Image Optimization Question

Whichever one you keep, how would you crop it?

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10 comments to Editing Practice/Yellow-billed Pintail: Keep One or Both?

  • Jim Amato

    Keep the second image.
    To my eye there is slightly more closure at the far distance, top of image.
    This makes the Pintail more prominent in the scene.
    What a beautiful color pattern on the bird.

  • David Policansky

    Fascinating. I looked at them for quite a while and couldn’t see any significant differences. Then I read the comments–7 of them–and went back, and still can’t see enough difference to make a choice; I’m not sure I even can see the differences mentioned in the comments, except that the eye in the reflection is a bit clearer in the second image. I would be delighted to have made either one and probably wouldn’t delete either.

  • Joe Graham

    I like first one. The second seems to be turning away from the camera a little bit.

  • I am going to go against the trend of what is posted so far and select the first image. What decided for me is in the first(number 2894)image the duck’s neck is slightly more elongated and pleasing to me. In addition the 2nd image has some sort of insect or something right behind the ducks head that would need removal in optimization. I agree with the comments about the activity in the water being further from the bill in the 2nd but the position of the duck’s neck wins out for me in the first.

    Looking forward to what you choice is and why!

    Take Care,
    Ken

  • Both views are very nice. I like the second one probably because of the debris being farther from the the end of the beak. Using PhotoShop I would probably save the first shot to use as a layer on second shot. While on the top layer I would switch to difference to line up the water ripples. Then back on normal I would completely mask it. Then with a soft white brush at 50% I would dab at the debris for the desired effect. If necessary I would clone with the same soft brush to finish cleaning the debris. Then I would crop a little off the left and more off the top. I love the reflection and might even try some contrast or sharpening. A little overall saturation might be nice.

  • Mike Vanecek

    Keep both and use compare to look at both side-by-side. Might as well make use of the available tools.

  • If I could only keep one it would be the second because the eye is visible in the reflection.

  • Bill Dix

    A lovely Pintail. At first glance I would keep the second, because I like the water around the bird slightly better. But if I just had these two, I would probably keep both until I was ready to finish processing. Sometimes when processing I’ll discover something about one of the images, such as marginal difference in sharpness, that causes me to change my first impression. I’d consider a 16:9 pano.

  • Alan Lillich

    I would keep the second one. The bird’s pose and sharpness is the same in both. The second has a little more room above the head to the dark line of water. It also has more room to the first dark dot in front of the bird, more comfortable cloning space for me. I would crop it into a pano. Cut off the left just in front of the leftmost dark dot that the tail points to. Cut off the bottom just above the higher bit of reflection showing some yellow. Cut off the top just below the upper dark water, keeping the lowest semi-dark line and some lighter above it. Take nothing off the right, I like the circular waves. Interestingly, this is the crop I chose just for appearance, yet the lower left third intersection falls on the bird’s back just in front of the wings. I’ll send the crop by email FYI.